The basic unit of the dramatic scene is this: give a character a goal to pursue, have them pursue it, then move that goal further away. Rinse, raise the stakes, repeat. The harder your characters fight to reach their goal (and the further they’re driven away from it), the more your readers will love it.
This is sometimes called obstacle-stacking, and my favorite example of the technique actually comes from a movie: the famous V-Wing fight from Raiders of the Lost Ark. I was hoping to track down a video of the sequence to post here, but unfortunately, no dice. Basically, it goes like this:
- Indy and Marion emerge from the Well of Souls and attempt to escape the Nazis on a stolen plane.
- Indy sneaks up to try to knock out the pilot. Before he can get there, he’s spotted by another guy.
- Indy gets back down off the plane, beats the other guy unconscious, but now the pilot sees what’s going on.
- The burly mechanic shows up and starts beating Indy to a pulp.
- Marion takes the blocks out from under the plane’s landing gear.
- The pilot draws a pistol and nearly shoots Indy, but Marion knocks him out with the blocks.
- The unconscious guard falls on the plane controls, the plane is now spinning slowly in place with the propellers running.
- Now Indy and the burly mechanic have to avoid the deadly propellers while they’re fighting.
- Marion tries to stop the plane, but the hatch closes on her and she’s locked in.
- The rotating plane knocks open the gas tank of a truck. Gas spills across the runway.
- A whole mess of guards show up in trucks, armed with machine guns.
- Marion machine-guns the guards, but one of the trucks explodes, and now gas is now flowing toward the flames.
- The plane is about to blow up, Marion’s trapped inside, and Indy is being beaten senseless as deadly propellers whirl over his head.
All they wanted to do was get on the plane! To me, this is a pitch-perfect example of how to create drama: a simple goal, and things relentlessly going wrong. This is the good kind of obstacle-stacking: the kind that gets your readers turning pages, forsaking sleep, missing appointments, and alienating loved ones.
But there’s a different kind of obstacle-stacking, which is neither dramatic nor gripping. I’m talking about the obstacles people set in front of them when they plan to start writing. Here’s an example, which is completely fictional and totally not from my own life, especially not from earlier this week.
- A hypothetical author (TOTALLY NOT ME) gets up, plans to do some writing.
- But first, better check email. And blogs. And Twitter.
- One can’t write on an empty stomach, so breakfast time. Better make it as complicated as possible.
- Oops, just got another email because I didn’t turn off my email client. I mean he didn’t. Oh, screw it.
- I need coffee. I have to wash the coffee pot and filter because I didn’t do it last night.
- Is it dark in here? I better adjust the shades. Now it’s too bright. Now it’s too dim. Now it’s too bright again.
- Better clean this desk off too. A dirty desk is the sign of a dirty — coffee’s done! Oops, too much cream. Now not enough. Now too much again. Now I spilled hot coffee on my crotch. Time for several minutes of screaming and worrying about my future offspring, followed by laundry triage.
- Okay, NOW I’m ready — maybe I should read a few more blogs, you know, for inspiration. Inspiration to do what, you ask? Look, nobody likes a wise-ass.
- The cat needs attention. Well I can’t neglect the cat, that would make me some sort of monster!
- And I don’t want the other cat to get jealous, so…
- Now to spend ten minutes finding just the right piece of music.
- All right. I’m finally all set! Everything’s perfect and —
- Now my coffee’s cold.
- You know, it’s almost lunch, I’ll catch up this afternoon.
- Ad infinitum, up to and including social obligations, TV series, the gym, the laundry, the telephone, the doorbell, and so on.
If this looks like textbook procrastination, that’s because it is. But that’s what procrastination amounts to: stacking obstacles between you and your writing. Sometimes they’re perfectly legitimate circumstances that come up. Sometimes they’re just situations you make up. Life will make it hard enough for you to write without you helping.
I still struggle with the urge to wait for the “perfect” circumstances to write in: the day that I’m well-rested, have big blocks of unbroken time, feel inspired, and meet any number of ephemeral criteria. While these days do happen, they’re like a combination of leap year and Christmas. You can’t depend on them coming along very frequently.
Moving yourself further from the act of writing is drama you don’t need, and no one’s going to find it riveting, least of all you. If you want to create a series of insurmountable obstacles, put them in front of your characters instead. Your readers, and your muse, will thank you.
7 Replies to “Two Kinds of Obstacle-Stacking”
Frequently, my writing time is after work, so the breakfast-coffee drama doesn’t happen. But the dinner-housework-dog drama does.
Well, and updating the blogs (dog and writing) and doing the social networking so anybody reads the freaking things, and then the emails from my family about why I don’t call….
Really, I think once pen hits paper, or fingers hit keys (with the text document open), all of these experiences can help with the writing, and make it more alive. But I also look at the writer’s retreats that exists and longingly thing that one of those would be lovely. If I could bring the dog.
Thanks for the comment!
I think writer’s retreats would be lovely too, but I agree with a friend of mine who said that they aren’t a true test of whether or not you’re cut out for the writing life. It’s easy to be productive and profound when you’re lounging on the back porch of a woodland cabin with the birds singing. It’s another to be productive when you’re hung over and trying to wrestle out twenty minutes of prose on the train to work.
All my writing time is early in the morning — I sacrifice my evenings so I can get up before dawn and get some writing done before the rest of the world knows I’m awake.
Limits on time and space are definitely fertile writing times!
Really, I’m just something of a hermit. Or I’d like to be, if I didn’t have to see all these people every day. But, currently, I just can’t get myself up in the mornings with my work schedule and whatnot, so I use the late hours instead.
Hey, whatever works. And if you can get in writing time without other people feeling neglected, that’s optimal. I struggle with that a lot, too.
Yes! It’s very hard to be like “no, no, I must go to my writer’s garret!” when people are all “I’m going to Denny’s!” “Let’s play White Wolf!” etc. etc. Writing at work on lunch is nice, when I have the space.
This is funny, and so true. So much happens that keep you from writing. The stacking idea is great to build tension, but be careful not to overdo it, and keep the pacing up or it can become cliche or boring… which is the opposite of what you want.
You’re quite right — good call on mentioning that, because it slipped my mind. Non-stop action gets just as dull as no action whatsoever.
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